Tutor Report for Assignment 6 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 6 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 6 from my tutor in terms of presentation.

Tutor Report for Assignment 6 – Documentary

Changes I have since made or was in the process of making already when I had my Assignment 6  – Pre-assessment review are linked below:

Assignment 1 Presentation – Handmade Book

Assignment 2 – Presentation

Assignment 3 – Presentation

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Final

Assignment 5 – Presentation

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Tutor Report for Assignment 5 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 5 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 5 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.

Tutor Report for Assignment 5 – Documentary

Changes I’ve since made to Assignment 5 include:

Assignment 5 – Tourism in London, And Me – Revised

Assignment 5 – Presentation

Tutor Report for Assignment 4 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 4 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 4 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.

Tutor Report for Assignment 4 – Documentary

Because this was a written Assignment, my tutor also gave feedback in highlights on top of a copy of the original document. I have attached that below so it is possible to compare with the subsequent changes I made.

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Original (Tutor Feedback Highlighted in Red)

The feedback from my tutor for my Critical Review I incorporated into separate posts highlighting the changes made (highlighted in red):

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Final (with changes marked in red)

Also my reasoning for making the changes:

Critical Review Final – My Reasoning for Making Changes Based on Tutor Feedback

And lastly the Critical Review in its final form:

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Final

Tutor Report for Assignment 3 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 3 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 3 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.

Tutor Report for Assignment 3 – Documentary

Changes I’ve since made to Assignment 3 include:

Assignment 3 – Gentrification in Deptford – Revised

Assignment 3 – Presentation

Tutor Report for Assignment 2 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 2 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 2 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation.

Tutor Report for Assignment 2 – Documentary

Changes I’ve since made to Assignment 2 include:

Assignment 2 – Presentation

Tutor Report for Assignment 1 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 1 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 1 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.

Tutor Report for Assignment 1 – Documentary

Changes I’ve since made to Assignment 1 include:

Assignment 1 – Brockley Brewery – Revised

Assignment 1 Presentation – Handmade Book