Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 4 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 4 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.
Because this was a written Assignment, my tutor also gave feedback in highlights on top of a copy of the original document. I have attached that below so it is possible to compare with the subsequent changes I made.
The feedback from my tutor for my Critical Review I incorporated into separate posts highlighting the changes made (highlighted in red):
Also my reasoning for making the changes:
And lastly the Critical Review in its final form: