Tutor Report for Assignment 4 – Documentary

Here I have attached my tutor report for Assignment 4 – Documentary. This is so the viewers of the journey I’ve taken through my course are able to see how I improved on the comments I received for Assignment 4 (and coursework) from my tutor in terms of presentation and content.

Tutor Report for Assignment 4 – Documentary

Because this was a written Assignment, my tutor also gave feedback in highlights on top of a copy of the original document. I have attached that below so it is possible to compare with the subsequent changes I made.

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Original (Tutor Feedback Highlighted in Red)

The feedback from my tutor for my Critical Review I incorporated into separate posts highlighting the changes made (highlighted in red):

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Final (with changes marked in red)

Also my reasoning for making the changes:

Critical Review Final – My Reasoning for Making Changes Based on Tutor Feedback

And lastly the Critical Review in its final form:

Assignment 4 – Documentary – Critical Review Final

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